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Alwye

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In the space between moments

0 posted 2005-12-19 02:55 AM

*This is inspired by and dedicated to Shelby O'Rourke, a very close and special friend of mine.

Soft shadows nestle
on fringes of lamplight,
the darkness kept at bay
by a shimmered expanse of snow
and your playful smile.

Laughter chimes
through crisp winter air
as we tumble with abandon
in silver-white showers.

Winded and flushed,
motion stills
and we lift our eyes upward…

The moon, our luminary,
shines encircled by a hazy ring
of celestial light—
a vision that binds us to the heavens
and each other.

The moments elongate
as we gaze at the glimmer
of Luna edged in foggy glow…

And our friendship deepens
with every breath drawn
in reverence
of the wonders we’ve found
above us
and between us.

~*Krista Lee Knutson*~

"Creating yourself is a spiritual act." ~ Susan Vreeland

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2005-12-19 02:59 AM

Nice...James

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2005-12-19 04:19 PM

Beautiful Alwye, just beautiful.

Miss your presence here Hon

Maree xx

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

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New York

3 posted 2005-12-19 04:55 PM

and what a most beautiful bond.

a vision that binds us to the heavens
and each other.

The both of you are blessed.

Alwye

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In the space between moments

4 posted 2005-12-19 05:47 PM

Thanks for the kind comments.

Dark Angel--I pop in when I can and my poetry writing is starting to flow again, so you may see me around even more.

~*Krista Lee Knutson*~

"Creating yourself is a spiritual act." ~ Susan Vreeland

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2005-12-19 06:09 PM

Krista~
Well ... this afternoon I left a reply on this that apparently got gobbled up by the gobble-up monster~

Now ... to say again ...

Talk the moon ... you've got my attention~

I'd say that Shelly is very fortunate to enjoy the poetic moon rings you've woven~

Merry Christmas~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

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South Africa

6 posted 2005-12-19 06:27 PM

Lovely poem but especially this -

"And our friendship deepens
with every breath drawn
in reverence
of the wonders we’ve found
above us
and between us."

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

7 posted 2005-12-19 06:45 PM

this is really lovely
your moon ring imagery glows in the dark

shades of paul
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In Reality

8 posted 2005-12-19 08:47 PM

YOU HAVE A LUCKY FRIEND...PAUL

shades of paul,peace,love,and happiness

Alwye

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In the space between moments

9 posted 2005-12-19 09:33 PM

Thank you everyone, I truly appreciate it! This was actually a real moment between us...we were out playing in the snow together (yes, 20 somethings playing in the snow...but it was fun) and we looked up at the sky and saw the moon circled in a spectacular hazy ring. It was an unbelievable moment--and I'm glad to share it with all of you.

~*Krista Lee Knutson*~

"Creating yourself is a spiritual act." ~ Susan Vreeland

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