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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2005-08-26 07:42 AM


hello laughter of the ink men’s shadows
bathe my plaster walls with your songs
burn my skin ends under the brims
let me writhe my time in their fire

and on the morrow there at the boundaries
of sky and ocean behind breath of wind
the gods will know my bones as driftwood
that scatters it's syllables in stutterspeak

from dune of day and un-tide led nights
that protrude like the neon of dreams
from bearded mounds on faceless hills
where walked before the fast foot men

from their hurry shoe frenzies to build
new altars to their demons and dames
the folding kind of promises that hide
in behind the scenes pocket protectors

only the penny man can find under his pillow
______________


dark


scribnote: charactor study of tattooze and suitz
dealing with the econimic
opportunity of inflated gas prices...
btw..the tattoozer is riding his most worthy metal steed



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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2005-08-26 07:46 AM


and on the morrow there at the boundaries
of sky and ocean behind breath of wind
the gods will know my bones as driftwood
that scatters it's syllables in stutterspeak

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Brilliant writing here.

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2005-08-26 07:48 AM


ms K' Thank you for the eyes
LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-08-26 07:54 AM


and on the morrow there at the boundaries
of sky and ocean behind breath of wind
the gods will know my bones as driftwood
that scatters it's syllables in stutterspeak

so, we know the same gods, do we not...(wink)


not to worry, their eyes are boared up in the rubble of their broken machines, we will
procede forward when the light turns green

Hugs and thank you for this!

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2005-08-26 08:21 AM


written deeply, this slice of life.
ah....but thank the gods for metal steeds yes?  


fight your fights, find your grace,
change the things that you can change,
and get right with the man...{van zandt}

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2005-08-26 03:38 PM


and on the morrow there at the boundaries
of sky and ocean behind breath of wind
the gods will know my bones as driftwood
that scatters it's syllables in stutterspeak

from dune of day and un-tide led nights
that protrude like the neon of dreams
from bearded mounds on faceless hills
where walked before the fast foot men

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Lordy I love the way your minds eye turns everything to poetry!!
you are captivating.

I'll bare the brunt of your long buried pain
I don't mind helping you out ...
But I want you to remember my name

Alanis

Sunshine
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6 posted 2005-08-26 03:44 PM


and on the morrow there at the boundaries
of sky and ocean behind breath of wind
the gods will know my bones as driftwood
that scatters it's syllables in stutterspeak

~*~

Meghan and I
and it seems,
the others,

were pulled
by the same
tug...

and somehow
I heard the
clatter of runes...

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
7 posted 2005-08-26 05:11 PM


ms Lee J..you sooth the sky my eyes keep distant with closing, thank you lady friend.

_________________

ms GS, you are a gentle spirit at the mirrors of fire dance, thanks for the touch

_______________

ms JM, behind me with your hands in the deep pocket water, you smile me thank you lady

_______________
ms sun..your gowns of reply bring musical perfume to my mind rooms...thank you lady friend

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