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what I saw with one eye closed
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what I saw with one eye closed |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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-glyph-glyph-glyph- a measured drop and beads? - you see? - they're mercury clingingly miraculous like whores who had been paid for this around the world without a kiss the pores of skin too thin resist a label of complacency they bleed the gloss of lubricant salt in channels deep below prove that once were tears. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Perish the thought what we could see with both eyes open! "salt in channels deep below prove that once were tears." ~ Just as the furrows on Mars indicate there once was water flowing... You have cried many a river, witchysis! ~ too many...  Linda |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Awesome. No other way to describe it. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
the eye of Horus (first thing that came to MY disturbed mind) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
when I stay up late and strain my eyes I see the rock people moving their mountains around just to screw with national geographic enjoyed you karen |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
there are places within places but the doors of heaven never close... You have marvelous eye (s) |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
your minds eye takes us to pretty amazing places, and the tears that became a desert, need to undergo irragation |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"a measured drop" In a literal sense, I wonder why we do that? alright maybe it's just me...  no, it isn't, come to think about it...because we greive and when we somehow reach that invisable line others start looking at us funny as if to say, "okay, your greiving time is up." Well, that is what I thought about when I read this..  love this lady. and you too!"too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
"resist a label of complacency" kissing your salty channels glyph |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the pores of skin too thin read this right after emailing you... once again the timing is twinny.    I'll bare the brunt of your long buried pain |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sei una bella poetessa meraviglioso. Mxx ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ah you know K... I believe that you m'dear see more with one eye closed than most do with both eyes opened... HUGS YOU |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
oh yes...what Donna said!!!!!!!! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
and what we see through your eyes....this is delicate Karen... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Hmmmm, us one eyed people know what you mean. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Just my musings on the wonder of the universe under microsopic scrutiny. that and a <--one eye closedlove to all thank you |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahh you mean as in LOOKING into a microscope? geez, you had me baffled here, K. (just her musings, sheesh) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You are so creative, lady! When I read this the first two times, I was sure I understood it's completeness. Wrong...when I read your comment, then I understood...and something in me clicked for just a second as if I were you at the moment of conception of the analogy....weird feeling lol. Anyhow, another treasure much appreciated. AND  ..... .....jojo |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Just came back to put this where it belongs! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I read you...don't often reply... mainly because anything I say wouldn't do justice to the beauty of you |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Such vision as this doesn't come courtesy of the optic nerve. *S* Simply superb! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
hugs |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
You see very well through your third eye, sincerity.....ummm I mean serenity. Truely salt must drip because of what the inner eye witnesses...it can tell a lie in a blink, unlike the outer ones. A deep poem, but I think I understand what it means... I know I understand that I like it.. -------------ice ><> |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You know what they say.... "In the valley of the blind, the one-eyed man is king" |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this poems style is completely different from what i'm commonly use to. a fact which shows your true creativeness. i enjoyed it very much and hope to read more from you in the future I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Serenity...You ever wonder why the world doesn't look have bad after a drunk? Most of the the time we still have one eye closed...Paul Glad to read you and take part in a little humor ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Paullie! Check your e mail! OH...wait. Let me WRITE YOU. gleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee man! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karen....a wonderful view through your microscope of perception. |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
damn. damn damn~ ~baby **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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