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Tim
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0 posted 2005-08-26 12:11 PM



I remember the summer of my eleventh year,
I had yet to see the seventh grade
and we still lived on second street
down on the end near the rail mill
where the fathers of the kids in the neighborhood worked in the mill
getting paid on the first and the fifteenth.
I got up each morning at five that summer and folded my papers,
not rolled with a rubber band
but folded in a square where you could side arm ‘em
from the sidewalk onto the porch
and if you missed you had to go back
because back then folks expected their paper on the porch
and to get paid you had to collect
which meant knocking on doors and sometimes people
not answering their doors even though you knew they were there
and if you did not collect on the first or the fifteenth
you didn’t get paid but were told,
come back on payday.
Sometimes when you delivered the papers
you would accidently sidearm the paper just right
and it would land against an aluminum screen door
and at six-thirty in the morning it would sound like the dickens.
paperboys were not supposed to hit screen doors
but sometimes it happened and strangely enough
it happened most often to the houses you didn’t collect
from on the first or fifteenth or no one answered the door
even if you knew someone was there or the houses
where they said
come back on payday.
Least ways that is how I remember the summer of my eleventh year.

© Copyright 2005 Tim - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2005-08-26 12:16 PM


ooooooooooooh...and tsk and cluck, too.

You, sir, have been hiding stories from me!



and this:

"but sometimes it happened and strangely enough
it happened most often to the houses you didn’t collect"

*innocent eyes*

It happened that way to me too.

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2 posted 2005-08-26 12:26 PM


And me   A lady chased me down the street once in her nightgown for hitting her screen.  I laughed then, and am laughing now.  A moment in time I enjoyed Tim, both yours and now mine.
Sunshine
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3 posted 2005-08-26 06:56 AM


Least ways that is how I remember ...

~*~

It must be payday...

or is that paydirt?


LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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4 posted 2005-08-26 08:10 AM




brought back many memories, of helping my brother get all those papers ready, only, he used rubber bands, and you should have seen the rubber band battles we had....hehe

anyway, getting back to your poem...marvelously smiling...thank you

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