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Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

0 posted 2005-08-25 09:05 PM

oh season of banners

you flap your wings
with the wind
and like a sail, you bang at
my wet soul

your crystal voice
rises from the past
from the vast distance
and
brings with it
the song of fishes
the ship wrecked
and the
echoes

weeping

oh season of uneasy dreams
wash from me
the ruined weed
cleanse
me with your salt….

i beg:

and i am caught
and i wrestle with the eye
of the moon
and collapse with the beat
of your waves

Note: For Donna, thank you Gentle One

~i want for myself your trembling~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-08-25 09:13 PM

omg! I was just getting ready to sign off for the night when I stopped in one more time to read before going to bed...

Oh Maree..
the way you write of her
when you gaze upon her
and dream...

sigh...

this collapsed me...

I can not wait, to return to her again someday...

thank you Bella,
for your grace of heart.

You already know, how cherished this will be to me.

yesterday is gone
tomorrow doesn't exist

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-08-25 09:57 PM

May I thank Donna, too...

for whatever she did
to inspire such a banner?

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2005-08-26 10:07 AM

ms dark...you do have a way
of whetting even the ocean
with your penspeak

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2005-08-26 11:31 AM

it always amazes me how you allow me to get right inside of every litle bit of Nature. I love that and this and who inspired it.

Eromyna
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA

5 posted 2005-08-26 11:51 AM

"and
brings with it
the song of fishes
the ship wrecked
and the
echoes

weeping"

That was extraordinary to me.

It's only a tragedy after we bleed.
Your pain doesn't count 'til it's stained the sheets.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2005-08-26 01:04 PM

OH WOW Maree....this is just another perfect example of true poetry....

hugsss you...

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2005-08-26 03:14 PM

"oh season of uneasy dreams
wash from me
the ruined weed
cleanse
me with your salt"

you are a kindred spirit...one with the seasons, one with the elements.

You couldn't write it so well if you weren't.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2005-08-29 09:55 AM

I had to come back to this Maree.

I know that when you gaze upon her and feel her, we are all in for such treats as this.
Your gift of talent is incredible Bella.

Thank you.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2005-08-29 11:20 AM

your muse is actively awake within a world of gentle souls, like the wonderful lady she describes....this was beautiful

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