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Imagination |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Imagination In shifting light and shadows lie The picture played upon my eye Sending waves of memories rave The highs and lows of paints enslave Each nuance of my mind to hand Each stroke that placed the fires brand Turned me back to sands of line That quelled me like a porcupine Stabbing me with fixed imprint Hooks that sparked the flesh like flint Bringing back the paints enslave The immediacy the rave The burning of the blinds inspire The lightening of the thunders fire Illusion brought into dimension The essence of my minds invention And now it hangs upon my wall A phantom that is six feet tall |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
delightful rhyme and read this morning Sey. Good morning. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Each nuance of my mind to hand Each stroke that placed the fires brand Turned me back to sands of line That quelled me like a porcupine whoa, isn't that the truth, but the quells I now see as The burning of the blinds inspire The lightening of the thunders fire Illusion brought into dimension The essence of my minds invention and the inventions are sooooo dazzling, are they not? And now it hangs upon my wall A phantom that is six feet tall Yes you are Sy, indeed!!! hugs and many thank yous Me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle, So glad you enjoyed the read, thank you LeeJ You stir the ashes of my fire, thank you and good morning sweet. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I always look forward to your imagination, Sy, and this one's a beauty. Love the vivid and fresh imagery. -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"The burning of the blinds inspire The lightening of the thunders fire" love those lines. You always write a cadence that calls to me. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 well done, enjoyed the read this morning |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sir Sonneteer! I always enjoy reading the fruits of your mind's invention! Your extraordinary imagination lends itself beautifully to creating fine works of poetry.  May you forever sleep safe in angel's keep! Loveya, T-Man! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MARK Your reply has given me a sack of gold. LOL Susan Thank you my dear. passing Glad to be of service. Earth Angel Sweet is sweet but neat is better. Love ya E girl |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
T-Man ~ Awww, shuckums!   E-girl [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (08-25-2005 12:13 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know it really is a shame when someone puts your paintbox away isn't it  I too feel that inspire in the smallest thing, but I let it pass Sye, and figure it is time for me to be doing other things. I think you know what I mean too right?You write of these moments so well, my wise friend. Carpe' Diem |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, I think you are right about that. |
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