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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-08-25 12:44 PM


Sweet Lovers Lulliby

Suppose you waited all of
your life to find your angel.
Would you be satisfied,
would you look into her eyes
and tell her how much you cared,
would you be thankful for the
fullness of love that you shared.
Would the sun and the moon
smile upon you two with a sigh,
and would the stars twinkle on cue
as the two of you sang your
sweet lovers lulliby.

JamesLee
August23
2005

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Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2005-08-25 12:18 PM


James,

This deserves a bump.

I found it's question innocent and sweet.

My answer is yes.  I didn't give up (alright maybe for a little bit I did)...

Always yes.  Always I believe in the beauty of people until they show me different.  That way I don't miss anything.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

poe
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2 posted 2005-08-27 03:23 AM


The wait may be arduous and long, but to hold your angel close is all that trul matters in the end.
Enjoyed.

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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3 posted 2005-08-27 03:53 AM


James, I think everyone would if life permitted.
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2005-08-27 07:21 AM


yeah...who wouldn't?
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2005-08-28 06:30 PM


Thank you Susan, poe, Honeybunch and passing shadows for the nice responses...James
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