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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2005-08-24 09:44 PM



Wonders of The Mind
~ By Sue ~

My mind is filled with wonders
I have no anwers to
When it comes to being loved
why do they seem to hurt you

Why do they throw those hurtful words
which leaves your mind a mess
When it comes to promises
why are they never kept

Why do they go into such a rage
pushing you across the room
Why do they want to make you cry
leaving with so much gloom

For their on purpose they use you
then, they just toss you away
Still, they claim to love you so
always wanting you to stay

Even after all of this time
I feel somewhat confused
It seems all he wanted me for
was just for his own use

He said I couldn't make it
if I didn't stay with him
Still, I took a chance
leaving him back there with them

I wonder what he would think
if he were to see me today
I no longer have him here
and I'm doing A - Okay

8-7-05



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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2005-08-25 11:37 AM


Indeed you are doing "A-Okay"! You've come a looong way, Smartest Chick! I know that some days can be worse than others, but when they raise their ugly heads, remember, you ARE "A-Okay"!!!!

Loveya!
Linda

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia
2 posted 2005-08-25 11:47 AM


Keep strong and thinking positive Sue , yes after all the hurt some  often go through , you have to start thinking of you !!!!!

Hope  

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2005-08-25 12:26 PM


SmartChick
Reads A-OK to me.

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