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Lonely Shadow
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since 2000-03-14
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Virginia

0 posted 2005-08-24 11:19 AM


Forced into lifelong servitude
Ousted from childhoods grace
Ripped from joyous wonderment
Gripped with such responsibility
Old man, like his father, he's become
Treating life as it should never be
The treacherous burden it now is
Envying those other souls
Never again savoring the grace of youth
Yesterday's long since gone
Or any rememberance of such joy
Under the prison he's made himself
The father he must now become
Hopelessness against his now adult life

Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death.

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-08-24 01:48 PM


gripping write...well done!
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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2 posted 2005-08-24 03:13 PM


wow, how powerful
and sad

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