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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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0 posted 2005-08-24 07:24 AM



bending nickles at the china man store
pressing the wrinkles from faces
with glass hand lookie throughs
and you there with the bare of you

just a wrist nasty dancing slender
from a silk tunnel of magic spells
and you wonder of my wisdom you say
since I am quiet like the oak forest

and should I whisper a windless answer
that it is the pools of your eyes
that swallowed my sound songs
and made my lips heal their seams

lest they disturb your butterfly
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dark

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-08-24 07:29 AM


smiling big here buddie...

butterflies are beautiful, dontcha think?

Nicely written D

yesterday is gone
tomorrow doesn't exist

Martie
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2 posted 2005-08-24 11:39 AM


DS

"and you wonder of my wisdom you say
since I am quiet like the oak forest"

When you are poetry, you are soundly ocean or bird or wind.  


Janet Marie
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3 posted 2005-08-24 12:15 PM


just a wrist nasty dancing slender
from a silk tunnel of magic spells
and you wonder of my wisdom you say
since I am quiet like the oak forest

and should I whisper a windless answer
that it is the pools of your eyes
that swallowed my sound songs
and made my lips heal their seams

lest they disturb your butterfly

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well the moths like to be disturbed  


just a wrist nasty dancing slender
from a silk tunnel of magic spells


*smiling at that couplet of cool*

and you wonder of my wisdom you say
since I am quiet like the oak forest


you know how I feel about trees.  

love the way your poetic mind works groovy guy.


MGROVES
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4 posted 2005-08-25 12:59 PM


nice

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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