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The Other Cheek
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The Other Cheek |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Other Cheek If I twist and turn my other face Truly, would I be another place? If my eyes could shed another tear Would it really wash the facts to clear? The wind would blow another day The sun would shine the same old way And things would die and things would fade For this is the way that things were made There really are two sides my face And a third given in the mirrors grace These to me are the three of the sage They live in the trinity of their age Trinity is vicinity But does not speak infinity And therefore I am back once more Knocking at the astral door And so I stay the wind and sun The way of three that’s only one |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
excellently executed Sey! This has a beautiful flow to it, with just a tinge of melancholy.  yesterday is gone |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this gave me chills, thank you for this morning blockbuster!!!! Hugs & good morning |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The wind would blow another day The sun would shine the same old way And things would die and things would fade For this is the way that things were made There really are two sides my face And a third given in the mirrors grace These to me are the three of the sage They live in the trinity of their age Trinity is vicinity But does not speak infinity And therefore I am back once more Knocking at the astral door And so I stay the wind and sun The way of three that’s only one ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ive said it before and I'll say it again... YOU ROCK!! YOU ARE SO COOL!! There are so many cool lines in this that I am giddddy  Trinity is vicinity But does not speak infinity oh ya get extra winkies for this one!! There really are two sides my face And a third given in the mirrors grace These to me are the three of the sage They live in the trinity of their age How ever many cheeks you got... Im gonna kiss em all. *L*  *WW*  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
came back for more smooches...lol and to put this in me library. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
As always, a wonderful write, Seymour. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit Thank you so much for the read and reply. LeeJ High praise from you my lady. Good morning sweet. JM, You are a one man rooting gallery. I love your replies, they make my day. WW JM, And with this you made tomorrow. SmartChick And as always a wonderful reply. |
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