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Gunslinger
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 901
TX, USA

0 posted 2005-08-23 10:17 PM



I hear the clock a buzzin'
But it's barely light outside.
I know I have to hurry...
Tonight I have to ride.

My entries are in Houston,
I'm in San Angelo...
In a cut-rate, run-down Motel,
With a lot of miles to go.

I guess I've hit a cold streak,
Been drawing up real bad.
That fall I had last April-
Used up all the dough I had.

Burger deals, and greasy fries-
A lot of chips and dip...
Sleeping in a roadside park,
Almost every trip.

Motels when I'm winning-
Back seat when I ain't.
I'll ride while I'm still able,
Till the time comes that I cain't.

My story has no moral-
Nor wisdom to impart...
I guess that I'm just writing,
Things that I have on my heart.

I called the wife on Tuesday,
She sounded mighty down.
I guess she's pretty lonely,
When I am not around.

She's having problems with the well,
Our brood mare lost her colt.
The television bit the dust,
Thank's to a lightning bolt.

When she told me that she loved me,
She was holding back a tear,
I told her, "Things are lookin' up-
I'll win it all next year."

© Copyright 2005 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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Posts 10286
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1 posted 2005-08-23 10:20 PM


Ever the optomist. Yes sir, you write as good as I think you ride. Real good.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2005-08-23 11:26 PM


Bravo, Cowboy Poet.  You never disappoint me.   ....jo
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2005-08-24 06:47 PM



ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
4 posted 2005-08-24 07:09 PM


Anyone that reads this is sure to know that you are the one that sits in the middle, I think you know what I mean...

I was a cowboy once when I was young, at leat I thought I was, untill I realized I was the one that always opened the gate....

Enjoyed the poem, GS

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SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown
5 posted 2005-08-24 09:17 PM


What a wonderful poem. And win, you will.
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