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Asleep at the wheel
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Asleep at the wheel |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods 
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ASLEEP AT THE WHEEL Something you do Will be the last Something you feel Will soon be past Something you see Will soon be blind Something you seek You'll never find Until everything you do Is done Everything you feel Is felt Everything you see Is seen And everything you sought Is found and lost Remember tomorrow You invisible giant [This message has been edited by Broken (12-19-2005 10:58 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Where have you been hiding? These are my sentiments as of late, but yours are more positive. Reminding me of the greats who saw beauty and died because of it. |
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pictureme2 Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 194 |
Gosh...something about these words grabbed at me! Perfectly titled and great ending no ending line! I really enjoyed this and I can relate! pictureme2 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I've often felt I've been asleep at Life's wheel for more than half the journey. Good to read you again Have a wonderful winter in wonderland. |
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