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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2005-08-23 02:26 PM



Its  a love for something I cannot see
I can feel it
Worship

God I don't understand
Being held in a bucket
Why not dump me out?
I don't mean to complain
I'm human, obviously imperfect

Disgust
This is what I do
My life and the strings
So much passion
And desire, just to play
The music...
Tick tock metronome

I can match it
I can do these things
Despite being cursed
Humiliating
Childish to feel like this
Sneers and mockery
Insults, but I don’t care

This is my passion
Its what I do
I have a right
Even if I have no right
This is my passion
Its why I’m alive

They can judge something else
Or they can judge me
I don’t care
They aren’t me
A light at the end of this

Body living here against squinted self-righteous eyes
I forgive them for condemning me
But if you desire, I’ll sacrifice it for you

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

© Copyright 2005 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-08-23 08:05 PM


wow...lots of emotion here
very powerful write


littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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2 posted 2005-08-24 08:22 AM


true blind faith in what you were given - maybe rather chose, as your talent this time around and also the insight to grab hold of dreams when they come your way.
green_itchy_stuff
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3 posted 2005-08-24 11:46 AM


thank you passing shadows

littlewing-Yeah, its like finding out whats really important.

-GIS

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

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