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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-08-23 07:20 AM


Of Wine and Water

The wine has turned mostly water
And dissolving all the mortar
Eating on my prime of way
Each moment gone has spent its stay

I filled my cup the wine of sage
Still sipping it despite my age
Swishing it my mouth for taste
There is no sage that I would waste

But water overcome the grape
And left my door of soul agape
Waiting for the psychic krill
To fill the vacuum of my mill

The register has lost its ring
And what I see I cannot sing
It hazes there behind a bail
With water as the misty veil

I think I missed the Arc somehow
Making furrows with my plough


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littlewing
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1 posted 2005-08-23 08:12 AM


nah - I think its probably due to weather SY
*grin*

You have snuck into my brain this morning.

Startime55
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2 posted 2005-08-23 10:41 AM


Ah...but just remember that by the time one is a sage, as you are, the wine partaken of is even the better for it is filled with wisdom even when much water is added it is all the sweeter to the palate....*big hugs*

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2005-08-23 12:12 PM


Seymour~
If my thoughts could flow as effortly perfect as yours ... I'd pop a poetic cork !!



You are wonderful~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Earth Angel
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4 posted 2005-08-23 02:02 PM


Mr. T., I'd follow in your furrows any old day!

Tho' you be an adorable ding dong at times, your register has not lost its ring!

I always enjoy sipping your sage tea! Coffee

Angel huggums,
EA

LeeJ
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5 posted 2005-08-23 03:24 PM


so, you chew your wine to...aiy?????

Wonderful write dear Sy

iliana
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6 posted 2005-08-23 03:31 PM


Whether wine or water, Sy, you always quich my thirst for words!!   ....jo
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2005-08-23 06:15 PM


littlewing
Yes there is some rain comming.

Startime55,
Big hugs back.

Marge  
You are a sweety.

Earth Angel
Just love angel huggums

LeeJ
Yes I'm a chewer from way back.

iliana,
You are a dear.

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