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Beki
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0 posted 2005-08-23 03:18 AM


1)

ocean-
sing me wet songs,
whisper me deep secrets,
seduce me with sub-marine green -
take me


2)

tightly
I hold to this,
the one truth of my life:
our hearts were made to beat together -
soulmates


3)


sensual
am I when you
breathe softly in my ear,
make me sigh and shiver within
your arms


4)

above
wind and water,
sweeping through morning clouds,
my spirit soars on deep purple tides
of love

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2005-08-23 12:15 PM


Beki~
Each one beautiful ... this one my favorite -

'tightly
I hold to this,
the one truth of my life:
our hearts were made to beat together -
soulmates '


*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Earth Angel
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2 posted 2005-08-23 12:38 PM


Beki, these cinquins were poetry in graceful and soulful motion. Each one stands as a masterpiece in its own right!

Love & Light,
Linda

Beki
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3 posted 2005-08-24 02:38 AM


thank you ladies  your comments are much appreciated
Spiros Zafiris
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4 posted 2005-08-24 08:40 AM


..hi Beki..these are all very good..bravo!


spiros

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