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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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A big round August moon Let us gaze Eye to eye Without fear It won’t be long Before I’m not seeing you Anymore A faint smoke Raises above the eaves A quiet fragrance Fills the air |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this clinches it for me, and speaks my words, rather clearly, after an incident which happened this morning, which was indeed incidental, yet, destined to come. terrific write. |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
outstanding write INclan |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautifully sad. "It won’t be long Before I’m not seeing you Anymore"... why it makes me cry? |
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