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In the Sun
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In the Sun |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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In The Sun In the sun I fitfully slept Digesting all my nights incept Intoxicated with the dill That spiced the ingest of my will The dancing of a dance Macabre Like running on a water log Balancing the ego’s weave To steady the go of believe Irrational the shadows fell Shoaling me a potent spell Spicing feelings filled with awe Filling up my very core Wave on wave it crashed in fold Nor could I find a straw to hold And drown me in a black of night Until the sun brought back the light But in the sun I could not wake Or shake the feeling of the ache |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've got to lay off those burritos and sauce, Sy...  Methinks you need some of the moth's raspberry tea!  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
" The dancing of a dance Macabre Like running on a water log Balancing the ego’s weave To steady the go of believe" A fine example of poetry, See More..  -----------ice ><> |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine I think you are right.  Ice, I thank you much. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Meet me on the beach and we'll have raspberries dipped in white chocolate...wash them down with raspberry wine...we wont even care if we get sunburned...lol  In the sun I fitfully slept Digesting all my nights incept Intoxicated with the dill That spiced the ingest of my will No heart burn from these clever rhymes... yer so kewl...  *ww*   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Any time any place any where. WW |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sy? were you the one keeping me up last night? Sheesh, no wonder I could not sleep. I saw so much more in this. *smile* |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Good morning Seymour. Good to see you again this fine day. I have to get on here before our daily thunderstorms come. Are you having them in your part of Florida, too? We have them every day, it seems, and I have to unplug my computer. Hugs,  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl Thanks for catching me before the storm. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
littlewing Thank you sweet. |
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