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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-08-21 11:19 PM


How could I've known the signs
I've seen behind
your grey eyes,
the soul is lost
and so is your heart
torn apart broken and down.

Can't feel what's not there
no matter who is around"

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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Bodger
Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
1 posted 2005-08-23 05:21 PM


I like this

Bodger

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
2 posted 2005-08-23 07:44 PM


sometimes we can't fix what's not broken ....

       ... and sometimes,
             we don't know it was broke until its spent.


        I think you truly found your loss ...

CT

Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
3 posted 2005-08-23 08:00 PM


basically you can't change people or how demented there mind is or thinks sigh no matter how much you love them

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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