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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2005-08-21 05:29 PM



When I grow up
I want to touch the stars
Grace your heart
And be your prima donna ballerina
Behind closed doors
When I grow up
And leave this pain
I no longer want to flinch
When I hear you speak my name
In love's fluent tongue


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

© Copyright 2005 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2005-08-21 07:06 PM


sounds to me like spiritual growth - as in going home.  Where all of us grow up.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2005-08-21 07:57 PM


Enjoyed...James
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