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soul drifter
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0 posted 2005-08-21 05:14 PM


(Can't recall if I posted this one before or not...didn't see it when I searched. Ah well, here we go anyway. For Beth.)

Me & You (Yin & Yang Blues)

You're the yang to my yin
I'm dying to open my love to you
but you won't let me in
I know
but here I go
adoring you from afar
you drive me completely crazy
but you swim around in my heart
you're unaware
of the warmth I've hidden there

For you
if you want it to
light you up inside
don't run and hide and say
save it for a rainy day
baby can't you see
it's true
I'm talking about me and you

You're the sun to my moon
I'm sighing this pretty love song for you
but you won't hear my tune
I know
but don't ever go
please don't disappear
or you won't drive my crazy anymore
will you please come here
and notice my eyes
wandering over you till you realize

I'm for you
if you want me to
be filling you up with light
don't run into the night and sigh
it's too late to give it a try
darling don't be so naive
it can be true
this thing called me and you

"Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey

© Copyright 2005 Zach Hilgefort - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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1 posted 2005-08-22 01:31 AM


I know Beth will enjoy this as much as I did, and there really ARE people who fit together as Yin and Yang!  Much enjoyed this 'Blues'....~S~

Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life

littlewing
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2 posted 2005-08-22 01:53 AM


*agreeing*

there sure are and this reads like a tune.
Put some music to it.

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3 posted 2005-08-22 12:57 PM


You know there is nothing better than having a song written for you, I know that feeling, and loved it.  Beth will indeed love this one.
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In Your Poetic Mind
4 posted 2005-08-22 01:29 PM


I can hear the music behind this....
passing shadows
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5 posted 2005-08-22 04:19 PM


Zach, this is awesome! Loved the title...just perfect!
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