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Xeonox
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0 posted 2005-08-21 12:19 PM



In an instance,
You and I became one,
But a second later,
You left me,
Like the departing sun,

Without you next to me,
To teach me the rules,
Who can reach me now?

I know you feel the same,
And as days pass us,
The more pain we gain,

No longer the bright future,
Can’t ask you to come back,
But wish that was not the way,
Your feelings for me have changed,

No longer your weakness,
You said no to me now,
You said the words,
Lost my heart right there.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-08-22 01:25 AM


Yes, oh yes, I understand this one, but one thought:  No doesn't always mean NO...sometimes it just means you have to try a little harder. ~S~

Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life

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2 posted 2005-08-22 12:54 PM


She's right - too much time creates too much distance!  Great message in this one.


"Carpe diem, quam minimum credula postero" ~ Horace
"Live Like You Were Dying" ~ Tim McGraw

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