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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2005-08-21 09:07 AM

Within

Within this walk of red and blue
I would hold hands with only you
Washing wishes with the dishes
Bringing laughter with the swishes

Hanging out the wash on trees
Drying it in wind and breeze
Putting them away once more
To have them to repeat the awe

I would the wonder of each day
Repeat itself a different way
Making magic in the sky
Like butterflies those fly and fly

It is the least that I could do
If holding hands with only you
To spend the quota of our time
To help the odor smell sublime

So walk with me this walk of blue
And we will make it all come true

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2005-08-21 11:11 AM

Sounds like a lovely plan, Sy-guy!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2005-08-21 01:55 PM

Martie
Thank you dear.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2005-08-21 02:34 PM

Seymour~

'Washing wishes with the dishes'

What a mind you have ... I'd never have thought of that in a lifetime of rhyme~

C'mere you poet ... you deserve a ~

I'll even throw in another one of these *Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2005-08-21 02:56 PM

Seymour, no matter what rhyme you present us with,
it is all so beautfiul. I love your poetry writing, Sir.
By the way, when are you going to publish a book
of your wonderful rhymes? I would certainly try to
buy it!! Let me know if you ever do....Or have you already?
Hugs,

Ethel

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

5 posted 2005-08-21 04:34 PM

Sy, Standing in line with Gary's girl and all the others to Buy Sy... love, martyjo

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2005-08-21 05:23 PM

Oh Sy, Isabelle...
these are the landmark lines

quote:
To spend the quota of our time
To help the odor smell sublime

You made my Sunday...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2005-08-21 05:48 PM

Marge,

one back.

Ethel,
You are a love, I'll let you know.

latearrival
Thank you I'll let you know.

Sunshine
You are a love.

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