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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2005-08-20 08:46 PM



Trickling water falls,
like notes from some
melodious harp
or a fluttering of flutes,
serenading me,
flowing into a cascading symphony
of notes falling serendipitously,
highs and lows frolicking joyfully,
dancing syntonically
over boulders and smooth stones
in carefree fantasy

~point and counterpoint~

dreaming of the distant shores of
nevermore and forevermore,
I bless the union
of hydrogen and oxygen,
mysterious magical molecules,
infusion, diffusion, illusion

sacrificed offerings in misty delight,
quenching parched hearts and lips
in a clarity of purposefullness,

with Life sustaining fluidity.

~Water~

Lifeblood
of all.


*

© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-08-20 10:44 PM


from the dew beading the petal
to the thrashing of tsunami waves,
one source births all,
and you and i , fragile as raindrops,
on this pathless journey

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2 posted 2005-08-20 10:51 PM


Mish, what a poetically cool refreshing reply! thank you
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3 posted 2005-08-21 06:41 AM


beatuiful write kacy

I have not seen one in real life, but hope to one day soon

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4 posted 2005-08-21 09:17 AM


Kacy~
There is gentle word movement flowing throughout this beauty~

If you don't mind ... I'm printing it out with a photo of the waterfall where my son, David, proposed to his now wife, Kimmie, years ago~
They will LOVE this, as they both are avid waterfall admirers~

There is great talent showing in this piece, dear poetess~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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