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Open Poetry #36
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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time
0 posted 2005-08-20 08:25 PM



On a night you gave

Wrapped in your demands desires that weren't love or anything you had ever discovered

Understanding you defined wrapping

Spinning apples that gave

A mystery of when

But never what or why

And now I awaken

To find

A balanced changed

To still find

What or why
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2005-08-21 06:49 AM

oh, what dreams can tell
froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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Michigan
2 posted 2005-08-22 07:14 PM

I agree with Passingshadow

Enjoyed the read.

:-)
SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10
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3 posted 2005-08-23 11:36 AM

Bodger,

Very mystifying write. Oh to dream.

Enjoyed.

SG
Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time
4 posted 2005-08-23 05:14 PM

The illusion of dream and the often hidden message

Thanks everyone

Bodger
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