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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2005-08-20 02:15 PM





upon the still
of empty nights

astride empty thoughts

wishing of stars ...

visions to life
where each can feel

such burning desires

becoming real

lay your hands


against all will
my endless plights

their immortal thoughts

expectating ...

stop mindless strife
as bodies heal

in touching the soul

stimulating ...


lay your hands


** ~ **

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ...  CTOwen/05

              

© Copyright 2005 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2005-08-20 04:30 PM


You made my heart vibrate in joy with these beautiful lines and that touching picture.

Love,
Margherita

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
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2 posted 2005-08-20 06:43 PM


this melts my heart..lovely

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328
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3 posted 2005-08-20 07:27 PM


Thank you for a memory.  I can remember when my son took that very picture when each of his daughter's were born, and I love to still see them holding hands.  


"Carpe diem, quam minimum credula postero" ~ Horace
"Live Like You Were Dying" ~ Tim McGraw

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT
4 posted 2005-08-20 08:11 PM


Life is full of changes but
always a beginning and an end ....

the picture spoke
volumes to me,

I just filled in the blanks

Thanks for the read and replies!

CT

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
5 posted 2005-08-20 09:48 PM


Excellent!

This picture is poetry of it's own, and the blanks you fill shower endlessly of their own accord.

Wonderful write.
TD

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
6 posted 2005-08-21 12:03 PM


sweet little hands
touch the poet's world of words

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