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Making Love to You.....with audio

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Balladeer
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0 posted 12-18-2005 07:41 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

  
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I enjoyed making love to you last night.

I enjoyed holding you close to me and feeling
The softness of your skin blend with mine
As it had so many times before.

Your hair was different than I recall -
A bit blonder, perhaps
And a contented lifestyle may have added
A pound or two
Here and there
I don't care.

Surely you could sense how I'd missed you
By how I kissed you
And touched you
And clung to you.

I knew it was you

Even though you looked at me strangely
As I whispered your name
I wasn't fooled.

I knew it was you because
It was your name on my lips
And your voice in my ear
And your thoughts in my heart.

I don't know why you looked at me so strangely
In the early morning light
Or why you left so quickly
Without turning without speaking

But I know you'll come back. You always do.

Your hair may be a different color
Perhaps you'll change perfume.
Perhaps I may not notice
As you walk into the room.

But as I lay beside you,
One fact will still hold true
That, every time that I make love,
I'll be making love to you.

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (09-22-2007 06:09 PM).]

© Copyright 2005 Michael Mack - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-18-2005 07:47 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(smiles) Yay! Oh Michael, you have such a wonderful, earnest voice that truly "feels" all you write and really convinces and touches the readers heart, dearest friend, I'm soooooooo happy to finally hear your voice, as I have begun revealing mine too in Christmas lyric posts, yay! (angel friendship hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, this song is destined to win your lovers heart over and over and make her fall in love with you all over again, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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2 posted 12-18-2005 07:47 PM       View Profile for latearrival   Email latearrival   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latearrival

Oh Deer! Another favorite blended with voice. Thanks for this one.  martyjo
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'Atta boy...



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4 posted 12-18-2005 08:02 PM       View Profile for Titia Geertman   Email Titia Geertman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Titia Geertman's Home Page   View IP for Titia Geertman

Darn, I don't have sound here (yet) in my aunt's house.
The words are beautiful as always, just have to wait till I'm home again to listen to your voice.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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5 posted 12-18-2005 08:11 PM       View Profile for tatalinia   Email tatalinia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tatalinia

that was an amazing poem, i really enjoyed it. great ending
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6 posted 12-18-2005 08:30 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

...*SIGH*...

Ooooh 'Deer....that voice, with those words.
May we have more please?
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7 posted 12-18-2005 08:37 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

Oooooooooh, and double SIGH !!
Thankyou for this Sir Balladeer.
hugs, Chris

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~Carl Sandburg

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8 posted 12-18-2005 08:57 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze



(I suspect yer enjoying this...)

I know I am.

tease!
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Karen took the words out of my mouth...I swear she did!!  
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10 posted 12-19-2005 12:40 AM       View Profile for pictureme2   Email pictureme2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pictureme2

The written words ahhhh
and than the voice that brought them life...
and than the big smile....
made me feel lucky! :-) Thanks for sharing
the love.
pictureme2
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11 posted 12-19-2005 01:28 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

"And a contented lifestyle may have added
A pound or two
Here and there"

I'm still blaming it on the M.R.E.'s.



still pouting over here yanno


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12 posted 12-19-2005 01:32 PM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

Mike, this was ultimately the bestest of reads....very much enjoyed that boyish romantic of you...incredible...nice to see a man loves with his whole heart and soul
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Your words have more power and warmth when they are uttered from your lips. Fan, I need a fan to cool my rising vapors!...

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LOL, look at how you lined the ladies up!
Hmm, nice audio, but was waiting to hear the heavy breathing part.
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15 posted 12-19-2005 02:36 PM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

LOL Me too, Kacy!! I was thinking the same thing. LOL
I knew the voice couldn't be as serious as the poem,
but it is....all of it is beautiful, Deer!!

I know ya'll get tired of hearing me say things about Gary,
but it is all the truth!! And, this poem reminds me
of some he's written to me....so romantic, and I LOVE it ALL!!
Huggers,
Ethel
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16 posted 12-19-2005 02:49 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

And his name was Bruce....
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sigh...

and thats all I'm gonna say,
'cept for thanks for the second gift Dear Deer!!!  

I love it when Christmas comes early and in unexpected packages!!
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18 posted 12-19-2005 07:41 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

thank you, Noah. Your comments are always so gracious and congrats on your 5 year anniversary!

latearrival...glad you enjoyed!

Sunshine,,,who you callin' atta???

Titia...my voice awaits your ears!

tatalinia..thank you so much for responding..

Enchantress...of course you may! I'd never turn down an appreciative audience like you!

Nightshade...I think you for trying me on for sighs...

serenity....you know I AAAAMMMMMM!!!

Martie..she's an expert at doing that! Thank you!

pictureme2...I'm the lucky one to have people like you to enjoy my work....

serenity....yeah, right. Those MRE's can sure put on the pounds....uh-huh..

LeeJ...thank you! The boyish romantic in me will live on, even when housed by an old man!

Earth Angel...I have a fan...and I peel grapes!  Nice vapors

Kacy...the heavy breathing is only for private functions...just use your imagination!

Ethel...I'll never tire of you speaking of Gary. One has to admire such loyal dedication and love for another....thank you for getting so much out of it.

Toerag....I'm surprised you understood it. It wasn't done in utteral grunts!!!

Gentle Spirit...you are more than welcome. I still have a gift or two left in my bag...
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19 posted 12-20-2005 02:55 PM       View Profile for inot2B   Email inot2B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inot2B

This is, well, breathtaking.  I let my husband hear it, and now he knows about us,
oh well.
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20 posted 12-20-2005 03:40 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

'Deer..if I pay the long distance charges..
will you call me and whisper this one real close to the mouthpiece?????
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this is a very nice write thanks for sharing

-may the force be with you in poetry

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22 posted 12-20-2005 04:14 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

inot2B...how many times have I warned you to keep him away from the 'puter??? Well, it had to come out....

Enchantress...send it and I'll pay gladly!!!

sharksbean...I thank you for enjoying it..
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23 posted 12-20-2005 04:49 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I'm not sure which I enjoyed more... reading the wonderful poem, hearing you read the poem... serenity's frustration over not being able to hear the audio... or your glee at her frustration! LOL

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24 posted 12-20-2005 05:12 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

I shouldn't have been so rude...this was indeed great Bally....I'll write a hundred times on the blackboard, "I'm sorry I was so rude to Balladeer in reply to his wonderful poem"...I'm sorry I was so rude to Balladeer in reply to his wonderful poem"...okay, twice...but I wasn't really that rude and I think you did a great job on this fantasy....
 
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