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Balladeer
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0 posted 2005-12-18 07:41 PM


  
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I enjoyed making love to you last night.

I enjoyed holding you close to me and feeling
The softness of your skin blend with mine
As it had so many times before.

Your hair was different than I recall -
A bit blonder, perhaps
And a contented lifestyle may have added
A pound or two
Here and there
I don't care.

Surely you could sense how I'd missed you
By how I kissed you
And touched you
And clung to you.

I knew it was you

Even though you looked at me strangely
As I whispered your name
I wasn't fooled.

I knew it was you because
It was your name on my lips
And your voice in my ear
And your thoughts in my heart.

I don't know why you looked at me so strangely
In the early morning light
Or why you left so quickly
Without turning without speaking

But I know you'll come back. You always do.

Your hair may be a different color
Perhaps you'll change perfume.
Perhaps I may not notice
As you walk into the room.

But as I lay beside you,
One fact will still hold true
That, every time that I make love,
I'll be making love to you.

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (09-22-2007 06:09 PM).]

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1 posted 2005-12-18 07:47 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh Michael, you have such a wonderful, earnest voice that truly "feels" all you write and really convinces and touches the readers heart, dearest friend, I'm soooooooo happy to finally hear your voice, as I have begun revealing mine too in Christmas lyric posts, yay! (angel friendship hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, this song is destined to win your lovers heart over and over and make her fall in love with you all over again, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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2 posted 2005-12-18 07:47 PM


Oh Deer! Another favorite blended with voice. Thanks for this one.  martyjo
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3 posted 2005-12-18 07:53 PM



'Atta boy...




Titia Geertman
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4 posted 2005-12-18 08:02 PM


Darn, I don't have sound here (yet) in my aunt's house.
The words are beautiful as always, just have to wait till I'm home again to listen to your voice.

Titia

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5 posted 2005-12-18 08:11 PM


that was an amazing poem, i really enjoyed it. great ending
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6 posted 2005-12-18 08:30 PM


...*SIGH*...

Ooooh 'Deer....that voice, with those words.
May we have more please?

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7 posted 2005-12-18 08:37 PM


Oooooooooh, and double SIGH !!
Thankyou for this Sir Balladeer.
hugs, Chris

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~Carl Sandburg

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8 posted 2005-12-18 08:57 PM




(I suspect yer enjoying this...)

I know I am.

tease!

Martie
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9 posted 2005-12-18 09:24 PM


Karen took the words out of my mouth...I swear she did!!  
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10 posted 2005-12-19 12:40 PM


The written words ahhhh
and than the voice that brought them life...
and than the big smile....
made me feel lucky! :-) Thanks for sharing
the love.
pictureme2

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11 posted 2005-12-19 01:28 PM


"And a contented lifestyle may have added
A pound or two
Here and there"

I'm still blaming it on the M.R.E.'s.



still pouting over here yanno



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12 posted 2005-12-19 01:32 PM


Mike, this was ultimately the bestest of reads....very much enjoyed that boyish romantic of you...incredible...nice to see a man loves with his whole heart and soul
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13 posted 2005-12-19 01:58 PM



Your words have more power and warmth when they are uttered from your lips. Fan, I need a fan to cool my rising vapors!...


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14 posted 2005-12-19 02:18 PM


LOL, look at how you lined the ladies up!
Hmm, nice audio, but was waiting to hear the heavy breathing part.

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15 posted 2005-12-19 02:36 PM


LOL Me too, Kacy!! I was thinking the same thing. LOL
I knew the voice couldn't be as serious as the poem,
but it is....all of it is beautiful, Deer!!

I know ya'll get tired of hearing me say things about Gary,
but it is all the truth!! And, this poem reminds me
of some he's written to me....so romantic, and I LOVE it ALL!!
Huggers,
Ethel

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16 posted 2005-12-19 02:49 PM


And his name was Bruce....
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17 posted 2005-12-19 02:56 PM


sigh...

and thats all I'm gonna say,
'cept for thanks for the second gift Dear Deer!!!  

I love it when Christmas comes early and in unexpected packages!!

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18 posted 2005-12-19 07:41 PM


thank you, Noah. Your comments are always so gracious and congrats on your 5 year anniversary!

latearrival...glad you enjoyed!

Sunshine,,,who you callin' atta???

Titia...my voice awaits your ears!

tatalinia..thank you so much for responding..

Enchantress...of course you may! I'd never turn down an appreciative audience like you!

Nightshade...I think you for trying me on for sighs...

serenity....you know I AAAAMMMMMM!!!

Martie..she's an expert at doing that! Thank you!

pictureme2...I'm the lucky one to have people like you to enjoy my work....

serenity....yeah, right. Those MRE's can sure put on the pounds....uh-huh..

LeeJ...thank you! The boyish romantic in me will live on, even when housed by an old man!

Earth Angel...I have a fan...and I peel grapes!  Nice vapors

Kacy...the heavy breathing is only for private functions...just use your imagination!

Ethel...I'll never tire of you speaking of Gary. One has to admire such loyal dedication and love for another....thank you for getting so much out of it.

Toerag....I'm surprised you understood it. It wasn't done in utteral grunts!!!

Gentle Spirit...you are more than welcome. I still have a gift or two left in my bag...

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19 posted 2005-12-20 02:55 PM


This is, well, breathtaking.  I let my husband hear it, and now he knows about us,
oh well.

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20 posted 2005-12-20 03:40 PM


'Deer..if I pay the long distance charges..
will you call me and whisper this one real close to the mouthpiece?????

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21 posted 2005-12-20 04:06 PM


this is a very nice write thanks for sharing

-may the force be with you in poetry

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22 posted 2005-12-20 04:14 PM


inot2B...how many times have I warned you to keep him away from the 'puter??? Well, it had to come out....

Enchantress...send it and I'll pay gladly!!!

sharksbean...I thank you for enjoying it..

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23 posted 2005-12-20 04:49 PM


I'm not sure which I enjoyed more... reading the wonderful poem, hearing you read the poem... serenity's frustration over not being able to hear the audio... or your glee at her frustration! LOL


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24 posted 2005-12-20 05:12 PM


I shouldn't have been so rude...this was indeed great Bally....I'll write a hundred times on the blackboard, "I'm sorry I was so rude to Balladeer in reply to his wonderful poem"...I'm sorry I was so rude to Balladeer in reply to his wonderful poem"...okay, twice...but I wasn't really that rude and I think you did a great job on this fantasy....
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25 posted 2005-12-20 07:12 PM


Exceptional...Now, tell me...who was she?

You rascal!

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26 posted 2005-12-21 04:16 AM


Really enjoyed that Michael!  I am hoping you will take some of those great oldies and put them to voice so others may enjoy hearing them the way they should be read - by you!

Lovely!  Happy Holidays to you and Fran.  I do send a healing hug to you both after this horrible year and will wish for a better 2006.

                      
Let there be peace on earth,
and let it begin with me.

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27 posted 2005-12-22 08:13 PM


Awwww! Now, I am seeing a different side of you. Such a beautiful poem.
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28 posted 2005-12-22 08:44 PM


Hey!  Who you calling a fantasy there Toerag?

You old smoothie Balladeer, keep 'em comin.

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29 posted 2005-12-22 09:28 PM


Suthern gal...I would call it a tie between her frustration and my glee

Toerag...I know what ya mean even when you don't say it, ya bum....that's called friendship.

Magnus...it was an unforgettable woman - old whatshername!

Smartchick...you  see me inside and out....glad you like what you see

Mysteria...yep, I'd like to do that with some of the oldies, especially since there aren't many newsies. Glad you like them and a Merry Christmas to you and yours

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30 posted 2005-12-22 11:44 PM


Maybe you can talk Kit into doing it with you on your collaborations, who knows?  Would be wonderful!

The Widow's Walk for one - but then I am partial to that one.  Oh, oh, and the one about the letters too!

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31 posted 2005-12-23 12:57 PM


I just had to pop in again for some more of your lovin'! Once is never enough!

Girl 2
Linda Lou

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32 posted 2005-12-23 08:41 PM


Finally your voice came through to me Deer and it was just wonderful to hear it again.
Wish I had a cd full of your spoken poems, because it never tires to listen to them.

Merry Christmas pal and keep them recordings coming.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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33 posted 2005-12-23 08:51 PM


The poem was too terrific!  Am downloading the audio now...

much enjoyed!

hugs, g

"A tiger who does not prowl becomes a rug..."  ;)

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34 posted 2006-02-12 02:44 AM


Mike, such a tender write....  it's hard to comment with tears in my eyes.  I listened to the audio, too. I will remember this.  (I'd send a rose, but I don't know how on this sight.)

~ Karen ~

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35 posted 2011-03-27 12:10 PM


Dang, I didn't hear no audio, but the visual was great!

A

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36 posted 2011-03-27 04:12 PM


Well, Alison, a funny thing happened on the way to the forums. The site which allowed one to save audio files which could be attached to poems or whatever was sold or taken over by...a porn site! After getting a few complaints for the link, I checked it out and, sure enough, the link led to pictures that definitely violated PIP standards, although they were quite tit-ilating! I had to do some fast editing to remove the link from several poems, where I had included audio files!

Sorry.....

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