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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2005-08-20 07:37 AM

The Eddies Rim

I swim about the eddies rim
It pulls me towards the centers core
I cannot pull away the brim
Nor set my feet upon the shore

My egos bends beneath the cruel
Time has warped my bones to slight
There is a trick to pack a mule
To stay the darkness of the night

Weary wears the cloak of life
And heavy is the stroke of time
And dancing to a timeless fife
Cripples with its pantomime

I would a flight above the clouds
To see the stars of midnight blue
To toss from me the heavy shrouds
And see the making of the dew

Each morning echoes with the din
And I cannot free the eddies win

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-08-20 08:58 AM

Ok.

I've read this four times.

It is hauntingly sad...
and beautiful, too.

Take your vitamins...

And eat your veggies...

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2005-08-20 09:56 AM

quote:
I would a flight above the clouds
To see the stars of midnight blue
To toss from me the heavy shrouds
And see the making of the dew

Each morning echoes with the din
And I cannot free the eddies win

But dear Seymour, you may not be able to free eddies win, but your pen dances in the morning light and stirs your heart to dance along ...

What you share with us is always so precious.

Have a wonderful time and follow Sunshine's advice... and you will see and enjoy the dew when it receives the sun's kiss and you will be mesmerized.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2005-08-20 12:34 PM

HeyFastEddie~

'I would a flight above the clouds
To see the stars of midnight blue
To toss from me the heavy shrouds
And see the making of the dew'

You are the spry
of beauty's poetic eye
The star of morning too
DEWING so well,
what you DEW DEW DEW~

Love you dear poet~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2005-08-20 01:43 PM

Sometimes we just have to lament don't we (is that a verb LOL.) You know what I mean, just plain whine! Now have a glass of red wine tonight with those vitamens and swim with the whales.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2005-08-20 05:49 PM

It's always a pleasure to read you Mr Tabin

Mxx

~i want for myself your trembling~

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

6 posted 2014-08-16 03:12 PM

I miss you, Sy.

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