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The Eddies Rim

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 08-20-2005 07:37 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

The Eddies Rim

I swim about the eddies rim
It pulls me towards the centers core
I cannot pull away the brim
Nor set my feet upon the shore

My egos bends beneath the cruel
Time has warped my bones to slight
There is a trick to pack a mule
To stay the darkness of the night

Weary wears the cloak of life
And heavy is the stroke of time
And dancing to a timeless fife
Cripples with its pantomime

I would a flight above the clouds
To see the stars of midnight blue
To toss from me the heavy shrouds
And see the making of the dew

Each morning echoes with the din
And I cannot free the eddies win


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1 posted 08-20-2005 08:58 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Ok.

I've read this four times.

It is hauntingly sad...
and beautiful, too.



Take your vitamins...



And eat your veggies...

Margherita
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quote:
I would a flight above the clouds
To see the stars of midnight blue
To toss from me the heavy shrouds
And see the making of the dew

Each morning echoes with the din
And I cannot free the eddies win




But dear Seymour, you may not be able to free eddies win, but your pen dances in the morning light and stirs your heart to dance along ...

What you share with us is always so precious.

Have a wonderful time and follow Sunshine's advice... and you will see and enjoy the dew when it receives the sun's kiss and you will be mesmerized.

Love and hugs.
Margherita
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 08-20-2005 12:34 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

HeyFastEddie~

'I would a flight above the clouds
To see the stars of midnight blue
To toss from me the heavy shrouds
And see the making of the dew'


You are the spry
of beauty's poetic eye
The star of morning too
DEWING so well,
what you DEW DEW DEW~

Love you dear poet~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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4 posted 08-20-2005 01:43 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Sometimes we just have to lament don't we (is that a verb LOL.) You know what I mean, just plain whine!  Now have a glass of red wine tonight with those vitamens and swim with the whales.
Dark Angel
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5 posted 08-20-2005 05:49 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

It's always a pleasure to read you Mr Tabin

Mxx

~i want for myself your trembling~

Michael
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I miss you, Sy.
 
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