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HopeS
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0 posted 2005-08-20 06:38 AM


Still Wondering About You

Neither of us said goodbye
Never once did we argue
The reason is plain to see
I am still thinking of you

Noticing the recent silence
Was I no longer needed
Its a question I asked you
Still it was never heeded

Still no break in the silence
Replies seem to be slow
If you decided to move on
It would be nice to know

No fall out or disagreement
Never had a wrong word
Still you had never told me
Why this silence occured

You did say to keep writing
This I had intended to do
I write my emotional chaos
Still wondering about you


HopeĀ©2005
I am still babbling on about the same thing , so hope you can bare with me

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-08-20 07:27 AM


babble on dear lady
getting it out helps healing

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
2 posted 2005-08-20 09:28 AM


I'm still wondering, too. Keep on writing. It helps.
Margherita
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3 posted 2005-08-20 09:33 AM


Dear Hope, yes it's good that you can continue to write about this and you do it beautifully, but ... still I wish you could find joy in the present, trying to detach from the pain of clinging to someone who maybe has moved on and can't find the right words to tell you clearly.

Nobody can take away what there has been in love and beauty between you. It will forever remain within your heart, but there is space within your heart which longs to be used, there is a bare garden that waits for new flowers to be planted.

You are beautiful.
Love and hugs.
Margherita

HopeS
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4 posted 2005-08-20 09:54 AM


Thank you so much  Dixie and Sue for your understanding replies

Hugs Hope

HopeS
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5 posted 2005-08-20 09:57 AM


Thank you so much Margherita for your thoughtful reply , I do write happy , loving ones in between , I shall try and find my happy muse , or perhaps get my hubby away from the T.V LOL

Hope

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