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kill me softly again
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kill me softly again |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Justin, I bleed in darkness waiting for your touch waiting to breath dusk will slide its woven tapestry of small lines the impalpable ash that I might be: Autumn's fire begs me to reach for you --- along pages of winter wood for long nights of harvesting the heart if I dream let it be it is the only art I desire you would then know the taste of water and how beautiful the echo can be between bend and seek the dream is up over the edge of the world I bleed between moment and memory waiting to breath kill me softly again You’re thinkin so complicated I’ve had it all up to here But it’s so overrated Love and hate it you’re so jaded And I’m the one that jaded you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
soft and beautiful |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Only as our Lauren can do. Awesome. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This.... fine line between need and love and back again.... marvelous! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
dusk will slide its woven tapestry of small lines the impalpable ash that I might be: Autumn's fire begs me to reach for you --- along pages of winter wood for long nights of harvesting the heart ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ you would then know the taste of water and how beautiful the echo can be between bend and seek the dream is up over the edge of the world ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ your muse curls words around the edges and pulls the moon closer to midnight... the echo is your beautiful poetry. *tossing you rose petals and orchids*   Im not asking for a moment, all I want is time I want to take this lonely, but Ive no place to be so baby let me breathe you in and take you into me |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I could feel your want, your desire, very passionate...as to be expected coming from you. Reminds me of the song "Killing me softly with his song"...love that song by the way... I love how you place words together... ~ARh "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very tender and loving poem, Lauren. It touched my heart.....thank you for sharing yours. Hugs, Ethel |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
Wow, cool write, I think I need a cleenex, Steve  |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
you definitely feel that to write that... that was from the heart and I really did like it |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
This is a series of writes to be published, right? uh huh . . . |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you would then know the taste of water and how beautiful the echo can be between bend and seek the dream is up over the edge of the world I bleed between moment and memory waiting to breath kill me softly again Whoa!!!! Girl, awesome writing here I agree, you gotta do a book, and if you do publish, I would love to know how and where to get a book! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
... between bend and seek softly CT |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Autumn's fire begs me to reach for you --- along pages of winter wood for long nights of harvesting the heart" Wonderful Lauren! The beautiful madness of longing... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good one |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
.... just needed another smile ....  Thanks Bunches!!! CT |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You do write the loveliest love... Autumn's fire indeed, sweet Lauren. I'll pray your warmth will stay throughout winter.  |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Love to all and thank you....heart hugssss.... ________ LOL Steve they have Kleenex on sale at wal mart 2 for 3 bucks.....   |
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