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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-08-18 05:01 PM


I haven't had a great day and I came across Nothing which I dont think I have published in this version

Bodger

Understanding outcasts your mind
Misunderstandings
Desiring nothing
You give all to nothing
You said "I desire nothing, I have nothing, I understand nothing and all I have to give you is what I feel, nothing"

In a world
You ignored

As ice crimson blue fire
Lances a boil
Of your futility
And your desire for nothing

For the world delivers

Nothing on request

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2005-08-18 11:13 PM


"For the world delivers

Nothing on request"

oh man, that can be read in so many different ways

if I ask for nothing, that's what I get
and asking for something may mean getting nothing, as the world (or God) doesn't owe me a thing, no matter what I might request

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2005-08-18 11:29 PM


In a world
You ignored

As ice crimson blue fire
Lances a boil

~*~

The sudden change
of happenings
exact a moment
like this.


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