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Sun Romance |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
In the smile of a sunset grass kissed tidying innermost thoughts crawling until sunlast In the essence in the stomach knotting with delight showing essence narrowly in a quite sunlight In darkness hours scent blends with scent that changes and changes over darkness hours spent To a sunrise glowing red that blends vision passion tiredness and dreams to a feeling tight |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
To the dusk that holds still until the last slip below the horizon Really enjoyed the lovely imagery in you words, Bodger. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Well done indeed. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you really have a way with words |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, a rambling of swift intent on need, desiring a last glimpse of warm... this likes me, Bodger! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
holding our hands out to touch what we see, is perhaps a moment of greatness, which in turn, rotates our being.... outstanding |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful imagery...very much enjoyed! Hugs~Nancy Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Martie 08-18-2005 07:34 PM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the dusk that holds still until the last slip below the horizon Really enjoyed the lovely imagery in you words, Bodger. IP: Logged Martie your words are beautiful Thanks Bodger Daniel J D -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Well done indeed. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) IP: Logged Thanks Daniel passing shadows -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- you really have a way with words IP: Logged Maybe I had the idea that romance didn't matter but people unless they are stopping the world feel they make it go around Bodger Sunshine AM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Ah, a rambling of swift intent on need, desiring a last glimpse of warm... this likes me, Bodger! IP: Logged If I attract your attention Sunshine, I must be doing something Bodger LeeJ -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- holding our hands out to touch what we see, is perhaps a moment of greatness, which in turn, rotates our being.... outstanding Lee J Please write things shorter I lose the ability and the joy of your words as it gets pigeonholded Write long and a subset for the talent you have Take care Bodger Enchantress Beautiful imagery...very much enjoyed! Hugs~Nancy Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near. When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back You are a born romantic Leave the sharks alone they need to breed Thanks for words They are appreciated Bodger |
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