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sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
Posts 253
Wyoming USA

0 posted 2005-08-18 03:30 PM


I know its been forever since I posted something but here it goes..I hope you like it and I think I'm gonna write some music for it


I don't know where to begin
I've been thinkin about you
Every now and then
When I close my eyes
during a restless night
I think of you
Then I feel alright

Its funny how our worlds have changed
We've been apart since that forgotten day
Even though its been years thats past
I still hold you dear and the memories last

Now I know this may sound funny
since its been so long ago
but theres something that I gotta ask
to see if I stand alone

Do you ever dream of
what might have been
Thinkin back when we were young
Did you ever want to start again
Now I know the nights have fallen
and the days well I've made it through
But I just can't stop thinking about
how it felt when I held you

Now the times have changed
And my lifes been rearranged a time or two
but on days like this when the sun is shining
I can't stop thinking about you

Do you ever dream of
what might have been
Thinkin back when we were young
Did you ever want to start again
Now I know the nights have fallen
and the days well I've made it through
But I just can't stop thinking about
how it felt when I held you

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

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Cloud 9
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since 2004-11-05
Posts 980
Ca
1 posted 2005-08-18 06:49 PM


"Its funny how our worlds have changed
We've been apart since that forgotten day
Even though its been years thats past
I still hold you dear and the memories last"

Knowing this all too well.

good write.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2005-08-19 12:04 PM


wistfully remembering someone who never really left you, after all
and maybe, she has had similar thoughts

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2005-08-19 12:24 PM


Yes I do....

I loved the song....and yes, please put music to it...

It has soul...

~ARh

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2005-08-19 12:53 PM


Lots of times...some with regrets...James
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