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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2005-08-18 08:18 AM



A-mused


in your arms
there is poetry
slowly written
in rhythmic breath
warmth becomes chills
of pillow whispers
as I read your style
clearly in brail

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart



© Copyright 2005 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2005-08-18 08:29 AM


OMG...this is gorgeous!
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2005-08-18 08:31 AM


1slick_lady
Now that's a slick write.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2005-08-18 09:19 AM


I like this very much..nice to be reading you again, Helen

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ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT
4 posted 2005-08-18 10:42 AM


Nice touch!!  


     Great read!       CT

Startime55
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5 posted 2005-08-18 10:58 AM


Absolutely beautiful...*big hugs*

HopeS
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6 posted 2005-08-18 11:18 AM


yes beautifully touching

Hope

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