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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Babbling I often sit a beckoning nook And listen to the babbling brook Where water runs o’er rocks of thwart Whose rhythm splashes me with thought? Carrying me on misty dream While feet within the cool of stream Massaging me with fluid hand Carrying away the time of sand It is an interval of wile That brings the pleasure of a smile Touching me with magic hold Sleuthing me like panning gold And there within the frame of sleuth I find the gold like specks of truth Glimmering the sun of day Bringing thoughts to come and stay And it is hard to dry my feet Until the argosy complete |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, T-Man! Your pan is chock full of golden mots! May you babble on like a brook forever more!  I found this scene especially peaceful ~ "I often sit a beckoning nook And listen to the babbling brook Where water runs o’er rocks of thwart Whose rhythm splashes me with thought?" ~ Now I know one of your sources of inspiration! It is one of mine as well! Morning hugs 'n kisses, EA  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel I'll have to keep some tea with me incase we meet.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Sy, I listen too  it's a wonderful noise |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
And there within the frame of sleuth I find the gold like specks of truth Glimmering the sun of day Bringing thoughts to come and stay And it is hard to dry my feet Until the argosy complete loved the acceptance which shown throughout this, and the vibes of patience with whatever shall come this day... this was a fantastic morning read sir. thank you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OH you KNOW Im loving every last word of this one!!! As Sen says... "gleeeeeeeeeee"  your babbling brook rocks me.   |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It is an interval of wile That brings the pleasure of a smile Touching me with magic hold Sleuthing me like panning gold And there within the frame of sleuth I find the gold like specks of truth Glimmering the sun of day Bringing thoughts to come and stay And it is hard to dry my feet Until the argosy complete ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ dry feet are over-rated...lol *ww* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
get that same feeling sitting by the fish pond here...  M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing Yes it is. LeeJ Really enjoyed your comment. Good morning sweet. JM, Your feet are standing in chaos. Wonderful reply. Perfect pictures for the poem. Maureen, Almost any water will do. Hugs |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I knew we'd see some water photos! You do bring out the best in people!! And moths, too! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
What a wonderful place to set your muse free...I know that when the brook babbles you listen with you special ears and then weave us one of your magnificent visions...this one is a vision so complete I too can hear the brook as it babbles...*big hugs* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Glad it brought you a smile. Startime55 Thank you and hugs back. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
nope, not chaos...Im standing in cadence and contenment of the creek kind. and now this goes in me library. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Thank you tink you are my main gal. |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
How soothing. Very lovely poem...I must say! Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
yv Thank you so much. |
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