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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2005-08-18 07:06 AM


Take me away upon the wind,
To a palace in the sky-
sailing forth upon an Angel
failing to be noticed down below,
Breathing faith into the wings-
flowing through the desert heat
seeing thoughts of you within the sandman’s dream.

Everlong been trying to take the dreams with me,
But Angel Storms keep forming-
and the feathers keep on falling down the stream
returning to the place my heart used to be,
Within a distant memory of a time long ago-
where my heart died and turned to dust
which settled in the sands of time.

Set the sun towards the sky over shining,
blinding visions white is-
this apiece of heaven in the sky?
Coming is the calmness of the mind,
Angels singing like the birds upon the morning-
hymning tunes without a name
believe in all unknown heartfelt places.


© Copyright 2005 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2005-08-18 07:11 AM


"Coming is the calmness of the mind,
Angels singing like the birds upon the morning-
hymning tunes without a name
believe in all unknown heartfelt places."

~ What a lovely way to end a very moving piece of writing!

It is good to read your stirring poetry again!

Love & Angel Light,
EA

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-08-18 12:27 PM


indeed, good to read you
Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2005-08-18 04:30 PM


Very good.  Liked it

Bodger

Cloud 9
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Ca
4 posted 2005-08-18 06:55 PM


Very will written...


A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2005-08-19 01:30 PM


Enjoyed reading these words from an angel...

~ARh

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

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