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Planet XY |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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You touched me there, in my darkness, where void was, you pulled back the curtains, allowing warmth, light, inside, the emptiness became fullness, tears were from joy, laughter, you took me to the moon, my feet have never touched earth since, I remain, standing, waiting, for you to land your ship, unfurl your flag, surrender~surrender, allowing your heart, to be my universe once more, discovered, undiscovered, we discovered eachother, on planet XY. "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write...loved it! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
I see that you have lost none of your writing ability..enjoyed this... Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Awww! The Planet XY! The place where the meeting of the female and male chromosomes took place! Cleverly cute!  I'd head back there! Perhaps you could re-connect, so to speak! lol  EA |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
quite pleasureable!! CT |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Now that was very clever writing ARH!!! I loved it Rich Only at night you can see the depth of the sun |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Excellent really good images Bodger |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
That was enticingly beautiful. I am completely captivated by your poetry. Lovely write...absolutely lovely! Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine |
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