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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2005-08-18 02:33 AM



Remember when we used to talk,
listening to eachothers voice,
we owned the stars,
the universe was ours,
nothing was impossible,
Time stood still,
as words came easily,
every word you breathed,
my heart was stroked,
the melody, the rhythm,
our song, played on and on,
sometimes,I can hear it playing,
whispering, calling me, to you,
in the middle of my dreams,
I listen, I smile with happy memories,
I dance with you, with eyes closed,
body lying still, it is then,
I am feeling you, knowing,
you are feeling me,
We touch, we collide,
and dreamwishes come true...


"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

© Copyright 2005 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2005-08-18 03:15 AM


this brought back some memories for me

what a time it was, indeed

Goldenrose
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2 posted 2005-08-18 04:31 AM


Vividly written...i remember...enjoyed the read..

Goldenrose.

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ctowen
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3 posted 2005-08-18 10:41 AM


very touching ....

       wishing you all your dreams.

CT

Startime55
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4 posted 2005-08-18 10:43 AM


What a beautiful weaving of the perfect dream...Absolutely wonderful dream poem...*big hugs*

evomx5
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5 posted 2005-08-18 11:39 AM


Some things we can never let go of. Thankfully, we have our memories and these work their way into our dreams...and those are the BEST dreams. Although they might leave us a little sad for the loss of that love, they make us happy, nonetheless.

This is beautiful...Mike :-)

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In Your Poetic Mind
6 posted 2005-08-18 12:18 PM


Hi ARH

this is what dreams are made of, keep dreaming...

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2005-08-19 12:55 PM


Nice...James
garysgirl
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8 posted 2005-08-19 01:02 AM


The dreams made from real memories are the best.
I hope all your dreams become longterm realities, Hon.
Hugs,

Susan Caldwell
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9 posted 2005-08-19 10:16 AM


"Time stood still,
as words came easily,
every word you breathed,
my heart was stroked,
the melody, the rhythm,
our song, played on and on,
sometimes,I can hear it playing,
whispering, calling me, to you,
in the middle of my dreams"

whispering, calling....something everyone can relate to I believe.

Enjoyed this.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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