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Open Poetry #36

Silent, Soft As A Gentle Breeze

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2005-08-17 05:32 PM

Iam writing a silent song,
As soft as a music,
Music of my heart,
As soft as a gentle music,
The murmuring breeze,
I will sit next the window,
And cry as a soft,

Iam here to say the words,
As silently like a bird,
Murmured into wind
The words I write silenty,

I came to your heart for your love,
Silently I hear from you,
You whispered as soft as a song,
A song I remembered,

When the time came to hear the words,
From your heart,
As your heart speaks,
Softly like a wind....

Silent, soft as a gentle song,
Silent, soft a gentle breeze,

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-08-17 05:53 PM

YES! what a fine write, vandana!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-08-17 06:00 PM

love this!

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2005-08-17 06:18 PM

Oh, this is lovely vandana. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2005-08-17 06:20 PM

*smiling* very lovely write Vandana

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

5 posted 2005-08-17 06:22 PM

This poem is soft and gentle as the words glide over the heart...Beautiful writing...a wonderful read...*big hugs*

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2005-08-17 08:31 PM

VanDana~
Shhhhhh !

This is just the loveliest of soft pennings~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

7 posted 2005-08-18 07:22 PM

Right there with the best.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

8 posted 2005-08-18 08:39 PM

so pretty

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2005-08-22 03:26 PM

How very lovely! *S* Beautiful write! *S*

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