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Humming Chorus

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Huan Yi
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0 posted 08-17-2005 12:59 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


So it was
Perhaps
Never again

The last light
Filters through curtained windows

All the morning’s visitors
Are finally going home
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia


1 posted 08-17-2005 05:21 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

not sure of your intent, the inspiration for this write
but my eyes were carried to Gaza
and many families, some moving out,
and some, back in
Startime55
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2 posted 08-17-2005 05:25 PM       View Profile for Startime55   Email Startime55   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Startime55

This poem made me feel what I do when I have been enjoying a visit from lots of my grandchildren....I love to have them but the whole house breaths silence when they leave...Well done...*big hugs*
LeeJ
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3 posted 08-18-2005 10:04 AM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

this reminds me of a forest...where light is just coming through a warm mist...the forest creatures leave their morning drink from the lake and this particular time, will never again exist?

Lovely John
passing shadows
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nicely done
Daniel J D
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5 posted 08-18-2005 08:32 PM       View Profile for Daniel J D   Email Daniel J D   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Daniel J D

There are such scenes happening every minute.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Drauntz
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6 posted 04-27-2007 01:54 AM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

who does not make a good guest?
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