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Open Poetry #36

Humming Chorus

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-08-17 12:59 PM

So it was
Perhaps
Never again

The last light
Filters through curtained windows

All the morning’s visitors
Are finally going home

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-08-17 05:21 PM

not sure of your intent, the inspiration for this write
but my eyes were carried to Gaza
and many families, some moving out,
and some, back in

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2005-08-17 05:25 PM

This poem made me feel what I do when I have been enjoying a visit from lots of my grandchildren....I love to have them but the whole house breaths silence when they leave...Well done...*big hugs*

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-08-18 10:04 AM

this reminds me of a forest...where light is just coming through a warm mist...the forest creatures leave their morning drink from the lake and this particular time, will never again exist?

Lovely John

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-08-18 12:55 PM

nicely done

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

5 posted 2005-08-18 08:32 PM

There are such scenes happening every minute.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

6 posted 2007-04-27 01:54 AM

who does not make a good guest?

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