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Replacing the Gloom ( inspired)
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Replacing the Gloom ( inspired) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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I hang my thoughts, those of before and those of now impressed by the softness of words, caring, so often lacking letting them paint my body with fragments of memory, gentle strokes in blending. Have I told you lately? No, been walking alone too much words being planted where they cannot grow. The seeds of my unrest suffer me, linking beyond my yesterdays when all I wish for is the myst from the reign of ... M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, How about a little dew instead.  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Have I told you lately? No, been walking alone too much boy that sentence there just about sums me up to the T. A graceful and gracious write...which lets us all know there is great hope. I'm certain he will be very impressed by this... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MzWynter~ 'impressed by the softness of words, caring, so often lacking letting them paint my body with fragments of memory, gentle strokes in blending.' GORGEOUS !!! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Maureen....this does sound inspired. Know what you mean *hugs*......jo |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
" ... CARING, SO OFTEN LACKING ..." ... I have heard this lately. * S CT |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Incredibly perfect...Magnificent writing...I love it...*big hugs* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes indeed...I know |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Echoing LeeJ. Beautiful |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, this is absolutely beautiful writing. You are so talented, my dear. Hugs, Ethel |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
And the magic Bodger |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good write  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I have to really think this one out, as believe it or not this left a very sad feeling with me Maureen. I only wished the soul of this walker were at peace. |
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