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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2005-08-17 03:30 AM



Today is the day
where I say I like
you anyway.

Near or far however it goes
at least I know you care for me
so.

Roads are whinding traffic is
trying,snow flakes are not the same
neither is to compare what we share

The day is done and night has arrived
pretty soon we shall talk then say
our goodbyes.


Sleep soundly dear you
just remeber that I'm always
here for you

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


© Copyright 2005 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2005-08-17 09:59 AM


Julie~
It reads like such a soft goodbye~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Foxyoasis
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2 posted 2005-08-17 01:45 PM


thanks
Bodger
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3 posted 2005-08-17 04:55 PM


Nice hidden meanings in this

Bodger

Startime55
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4 posted 2005-08-17 04:57 PM


Softly said with tender emotions....*big hugs*

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5 posted 2005-08-17 05:02 PM


good read
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