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Love's Awakening (for the dreamers)
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Love's Awakening (for the dreamers) |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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Set one of the stage opens to show a table for two prepared near the door. Fairy lights dazzle and sparkle with hues dancing and glowing up to the moon. Reflections in water of love’s precious dew surround the table covered in blue and the music that plays whispers a tune of heaven’s own bliss that’s come none too soon. Locked hand in hand a couple emerge, he walking proud with graying of hair, she passed her prime and showing the signs, they dance until chimes of midnight resound. The glow from the fire inside of the door promises comfort for love’s early dawn but the call of the wild can be seen in her eyes as she leads him away to the fields and the sky. On a blanket laid out in nature’s own way passion awakes from living as dead and stars hide their eyes behind soft wispy clouds as naked and proud they offer themselves. He kisses her fully joining their lips as hands slowly travel down to her hips and the essence of her releases to him the truth of her being so different from his. The wind brushes bodies with unspoken pleas sending out messages coded yet clear and the pleasure they give returns to their souls as heaven smiles down the blessing of love. Scene two opens now with return to their homes as sun touches bodies still warm with own glows but the fire has burnt to ashes of cold and the stage slowly turns as they enter the door. Two beds far apart and divided by “life” await their return without any warmth and as the sun rises they each can be found … smiling in sleep for the night took their souls! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, Brava, Helen!!! Call me a dreamer.  ....jo |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Hi, Dreamer Jo!  Dreams are the saviours of soul because otherwise we wouldn't know. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Love's Awakening... Yep, for sure! This is quite beautiful, even if the aging process isn't! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Honeybunch That was quite a trip. Enjoyed |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
do you know how so this reminded me of the notebook? Heartfelt joy fills the reader to know, that eternity awates them... lovely write dear lady, enjoyed! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
The glow from the fire inside of the door promises comfort for love’s early dawn but the call of the wild can be seen in her eyes as she leads him away to the fields and the sky. wonderful visions in your words Helen *s M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a moving piece...loved the title and the rest that followed |
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