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Open Poetry #36
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Tim
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0 posted 2005-08-16 06:54 PM

Beyond the far horizon,
Beyond the distant lea,
Higher than the highest mountain,
Is where I long to be.

To soar amongst the stars above,
To sail celestial sea,
With Orion at the helm,
Is where I yearn to be.

Up beyond the Southern Cross,
Further yet past Luna's glow,
That is the place I yearn to be,
To where I long to go.

I stand alone a mortal being,
beneath night's welkin sky,
Gazing up to where I long,
To where I yearn to fly.
© Copyright 2005 Tim - All Rights Reserved
Bodger
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1 posted 2005-08-16 06:58 PM

I like this

Bodger
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2 posted 2005-08-16 07:17 PM

love the ending
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3 posted 2005-08-17 01:16 AM

Tim...Great poem. Follow your dreams. Thanks for sharing...Paul

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Paul

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Gaia
4 posted 2005-08-17 08:12 PM

What a soaring write!
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