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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2005-08-16 01:37 AM


my bones
they feel autumn coming
and my heart
i know
will soon feel winter

the frost will come
and i'll be left in the cold
waiting for summers thaw
once more

my hearts strings have been played
and here i am
sheets of music on the floor
and i don't know what to play
you'll leave through the cold
and expect me to stay warm

here i am
standing with
my hands in the air
waiting till you see
it could be summer all year
if only you would let it

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iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2005-08-16 02:21 AM


Another heartfelt write.  
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2005-08-16 05:55 AM


wow...I know how this feels

a write straight from the heart, for sure

froggy
Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
3 posted 2005-08-16 12:13 PM


Beautiful.

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

marcel
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 660
az, usa
4 posted 2005-08-18 12:05 PM


dang, sounds like the man in this scenerio has a good thing and does not know it...I feel the quiet but strong voice in this...beautifully expressed and real to the touch...
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