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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-08-16 01:22 AM



Loneliness Is

Loneliness is the
absence of another.

Or maybe another
is present,
but a connection
is absent.

And who know
the reasons why,
one person tries
their best to connect
and another
refuses
to try.

JamesLee
August14
2005

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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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1 posted 2005-08-16 01:42 AM


lonliness is the missing of something ....
                       or of someone.


    truth!

      CT

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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2 posted 2005-08-16 02:01 AM


"Or maybe another
is present,
but a connection
is absent.

And who know
the reasons why,
one person tries
their best to connect
and another
refuses
to try."

Exactly.  Hi, JamesLee......hope this is you being lonely.   ...jo

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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3 posted 2005-08-16 12:15 PM


beautifully written.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2005-08-16 12:32 PM


JamesLee~
You nailed it !!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2005-08-16 05:29 PM


the person is there but the connection is absent...
wow

awesome piece James!

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2005-08-16 07:38 PM


Thank you ctowen, iliana, froggy, Marge and passing shadows for the nice responses...
This was written from experience...but right now is the least lonely I've ever been in my life...and the feeling is fantastic...James

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