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Love Poem
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Love Poem |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Trickling well we were melting on a day of wind Blowing us together it was a blinding blend We all stuck together Took days to prise apart Just for the look in your eyes Something burst apart Knowledge Bodger |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just for the look in your eyes wow |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You are writing some beautiful works and I really enjoyed this one. Delicate, and subtle. TD |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Love the first line of this especially! Wow! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Bodger...Stunning thoughts. Enjoyed...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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