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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-08-15 07:41 AM


Sweet Melodies

Sweet melodies play my ear
And move my feet to taps of do
Despite the waves of lapping fear
I dance upon the new born dew

My steps are light upon the ground
The world is waking up to dawn
Where shadows move in soundless sound
To sew their length upon the morn

The tree wakes up in mornings shimmer
The sky has gone from dark to grey
And light now paints a morning’s glimmer
The clouds now move in dancing gay

And there upon the ground in light
A doorway to the bright of day
Where birds once more take to flight
Awake and busy on their way

They fly the sky now full of gold
And I am also of this mould


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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2005-08-15 08:02 AM


My steps are light upon the ground
The world is waking up to dawn
Where shadows move in soundless sound
To sew their length upon the morn

The tree wakes up in mornings shimmer
The sky has gone from dark to grey
And light now paints a morning’s glimmer
The clouds now move in dancing gay


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All one needs to do to hear sweet melodies, is read your poetry aloud...
your cadence is music to me ears.
Good morning me sweet Sy-babers.

*ww*

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2005-08-15 08:18 AM


JM,
Good morning love, just getting ready to leave. I'll write again if I can steal some time.

LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-08-15 09:52 AM


this, as you describe, and you, are the best part of mornings wake up call...

Loved this Sy

Startime55
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4 posted 2005-08-15 10:14 AM


Every time you write a poem you take us on a flight of joy with you so yes indeed you are of the same mould....A delight to read first thing in the morning as the sun turns the world to gold once more...*big hugs*

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5 posted 2005-08-15 10:27 AM


I believe LeeJ's comment says it all Seymour.
I have missed reading you while I have been on holiday. Big hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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