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Disappearing Act
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Disappearing Act |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Five thousand miles is a long way to go to be with an internet friend that you know! But I love adventure, the timing was right So over the ocean I flew one dark night.... The new land I entered was ancient and bold And for a short while, I had your hand to hold But as with the rest of my gypsy heart’s dreams my hopes disappeared, or at least so it seems... It didn’t take long to discover the loss the nights were spent turning and how I would toss But, I’m a survivor, and always will be No matter what country, I’ll always have me... I gave up my music, my writing, my self Just to find out I was stuck on some shelf And you had pulled one disappearing fine act Your body is there, but it’s love that you lack... Still I hold on, as I’m told I must do By government big shots who think just like you So, time is my friend now, and teaching me lots How to hide feelings, and never show thoughts... But I’m a fast learner, and now know the game The wand’s in your hand, but it’s mine all the same So in the next years I will gain what I lacked Witness you’ll be to my own disappearing act!!  Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
bravo bravo i cant taste the poison that im drinking your death is in disguise |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sunnyone...I hope all was not lost on your journey. Don't disappear from Passions...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I'm sure many can relate to this and I enjoyed the read. Good luck! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
So incredibly intense that one feels your words deeply and finds them familiar...The lessons can be good but remember opening your heart in words is a very big part of you...Though your trust has been badly damaged I hope some healing can come from your return to writing and to the blue pages of those who love you...Take care, dear one and write on...there is healing in your words...**big big hugs* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Honey?  Keep in touch. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I know others that this as happened too , all I can say is , keep strong and keep being you ...... I also have had an online friend for 9 years that has done a disappearing act Hope |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello, my friend. My thoughts and prayers have been with you and will continue to be. By the way, you may not be writing as much, but you haven't lost your touch, Sweetie. I could feel this that you wrote. Please take care of YOU. Hugs,  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello my dear frends, and thank you so much...your love is felt across the many miles, and I've missed you!!! Sunny |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
I understand. Good write! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny~ You always know where to find friends~ Be safe, aware and know we care~ Got your email ... and answered you right back ... ANYTIME dear one .... anytime~  *HUGLETS* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
There is so much pain in your words it seems they're framed by unfulfilled dreams. But... there's also such immense strength in these lines I know you'll find other dreams... It's so good to see you posting! I've missed my birthday twin! *S* |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
You write from great strength and conviction, i could feel the words. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sunnyone, you rock! with this one!!! ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
straight from the heart! *sending hugs* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
I gave up my music, my writing, my self Just to find out I was stuck on some shelf And you had pulled one disappearing fine act Your body is there, but it’s love that you lack... you posted on two of my poems rather nicely i must say so i figured you would be amazing with poetry so i am not surprised in the least bit kind words from a talented heart. wonderful wonderful. |
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